Amuse: I like the colours in that shot
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Dspirit: The second photo, imo, is better than the first. In the first shot her face is too plastic looking.
Majin: Your colour profile is most likely off. Posting for web is different than viewing your own photo on your desktop not via the browser. I believe you are working in aRGB in adobe? Convert it to RGB for web. (I think I'm right)