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Hi Senna,
Here are my comments on your photos.
1) I feel that they are too close to the background. I'm not fond of the drop shadow. The girl seems awkward... like she doesn't know really what to do. Her expression doesn't really give me much about the photo or the mood. I would also say that her position isn't the most flattering for her physique. I think turning her more profile OR a full 3/4 to the camera would give her a less "thick" look. The way she claws her hand also isn't very flattering.
2) Her positioning being arched back doesn't flatter her tummy very well. Her expression is also borderline. I'm guessing that you were wanting a non-chalant a little stand-offish kinda expression, but I don't think it's coming through. White piece of the cuff is showing behind her. Either eliminate it completely or make it more obvious.
3) Really doesn't strike me... sorry. As a paraphrase of what Salar once said to me... there's no continuity to the image, no link and no full concept that I can grasp.
4) Ur PS is fuzzy around her... and her pose is... funny looking... awkward and confusing.
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