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Old 02-18-2008, 10:25 PM   #3486
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^^ I hope you don't mind the C&C from me.

1. The car looks like it's going to slide right off the frame. The angle is to extreme, remember that.

2. Meh, nothing to really focus on. Shape? Rims? I don't know?

3. Ok composition, but your left side isn't strong enough to support the car.

4. Bad location! Cars in the back are still very visable and parked right on the roof .

5. Fire hidrant is so bright it's sort of overpowering the image. If you want to close the car withing a frame you should find something on the other side too.

6. The composition isn't very good, so whatever you do to the colours won't help.

Take my C&C's and learn from them. If you have any questions please don't hesitate to post.
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