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Old 09-13-2008, 10:16 PM   #4165
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Hi Gyuji!
Is that your Soarer?

Some CC from me:
Pictures1:Background is to busy, looks like everything's just growing out of the top of the car.

Pictures2:Soft of underexposed and it looks like you just shot that car at eye level. Be creative next time and shoot lower, or higher, or move left and right a little. You might be taking more pictures, but you'll be exploring new angles that you wouldn't initially see.
Try moving the car away from the subject, maybe even moving back and try separating it with lighting or depth of field.

Picture3: Car stands out from the background, but your composition is very poor. The car isn't really center, it's not really 3rds on the screen. The colours catching my eye, but then I loose interest pretty fast.

Keep shooting!
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