Thread: The : I'm Bored, Let's make a Haiku. Thread.
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Old 06-08-2009, 06:09 PM   #109
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Originally Posted by +Kardboard+ View Post
I made it to Chief
But it was just too short, la
Oh well, I'll return soon?
That's not a haiku,
Your last line is much too long.
At least you made Chief.
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