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Old 12-25-2009, 11:24 PM   #5328
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Originally Posted by ColinK View Post

Aside from the fact that a bunch have random white and black strips of nothing across them,

1) distracting background. You've got light poles coming out of the roof, random cars in the background, it's distracting from the subject.
2) your shadow is cast on the car

The pictures towards the end are "better" than the ones in the beginning in my opinion.

Check out the 'rule of thirds'. The last couple pictures use it quite well, but the first, say, half, dont.
+1 and I see your reflection in a couple of the shots. Lens flare and glare are not easy on the eyes. Overexposed sky. Too much sky..

EDIT: lol you removed the ones that I liked best. haah!

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