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Old 12-27-2009, 10:02 AM   #8684
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^ Let me be straight up, I HATE the first photo. The tiltings so bad I actually have to tilit my head to read the image - I should not be turning that far!
The other problem is your composition, you cut off a subject you're trying to represent!

Second image is better, the tilt is OK. What bothers me is that the kids hand in the back is getting cut off by light and the frame. I also tend to focus more on him because the light is stronger there.

PS: Your making me tilt extreme right, then back to the left .. sigh
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