First things first...let's learn about the rule of thirds. Once you get that part of composition, you'll find that your pictures have a greater sense of balance. Then go on to learn other parts about composition like leading lines and golden rules and whatever.
Then once you've got all that down, forget it all and shoot.
Not trying to put you down but no one ever got better just from people telling them their stuff is great. We don't give enough critique in here.