lol don't take it so hard dude i think what everyone is trying to say is you put in effort?
if you did then you're going to need to put a whole lot more work into this.
right now your business looks like chicken scratch and no one clearly understands what it is other than you.
negative comments are really just pieces of advice on things you need to improve on. if you can't take them seriously then you shouldn't be asking for money.
its unfortunate you put out something so unfinished and so unprofessional that you pretty much blew your chance. first impressions are very hard to overcome. good luck and all the best to you hoping you can actually make something out of this and make our jaws drop and become one of those rich asians that shark tank wants to be.
still not sure if this is a troll lol
